Writing Exercise – Raising the Stakes for Your Characters


Last week, I asked you to write about conflicts facing your characters.

I gave these examples:

Character Goal: Flynn wants to be a good news reporter.

Conflict 1: He can’t be a reporter because he is the story now. He has to figure out his new role, and how he can help.

Character Goal: Flynn longs to be reunited with his long-time girlfriend, Darya Fitzgerald.

Conflict 2: His ship is stranded in unknown space on the other side of the universe.

Character Goal: He wants to be adored and respected among the colonists of his ship.

Conflict 3: When aliens start talking to him first, many colonists are wary and some even fear him.

Now I want to make my problems worse. This is the part where I have to be a bit careful – I’m in danger of giving away too much about a book I hope to sell. Hey, I have kids to put through university about 12 or so years down the road – can’t blame me for wanting a bit of help, if my writing can help me get it.

But hey, I don’t have to tell you how William Flynn solves any of these problems, do I? The same goes for you – I actually don’t want you to tell me how your characters solve anything, but you should have some of the details about the solutions in your mind. You want to raise the stakes, yes, but you also have to make sure you have some way out in mind. I wouldn’t want you to put your characters in impossible positions, but if your problems seem impossible to a reader before they finish your book, you’re doing a great job!

I’ll start with Conflict 1:

Character: William Flynn

Goal: He wants to be a respected news reporter.

Problem: He is thrust into a unique role among his crew and has to figure out where his skills fit in.

How does this problem get worse? List a few possibilities:

  • He regularly interviews crew members as he asks for opinions on the captain’s responses to crises, but finds that many people don’t trust him.
  • He has several drone cameras that can fly outside the ship, and these prove useful in some situations. In a heated battle, however, he still finds himself on the sidelines.
  • He tries to aid as an interpreter when he accompanies the captain to negotiate with alien enemies, but ends up getting seriously injured in a firefight.


It’s time for you to try. What are some ways your character’s problems could get worse?




How could this problem get worse? List a few possibilities:



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