As I said on Tuesday, I’m working with one of my old stories and improving it. Here are the details I had to set up my new take on the story:
Two word & single-sentence description:
Ambitious magician: Robert is an ambitious stage magician who learns a real magic spell, along with the terrible cost of using it.
Robert wants to be a rich and famous magician. He is also passionately in love with Carla, the seasoned performer who taught him real magic.
Robert’s mom is alone for Thanksgiving, but his next show is right after – he needs to be with her.
Carla wants him to use his new magic to get to his mom and get back quickly, but Robert realizes he will have to sacrifice a special memory to power the teleportation spell.
Carla convinces Robert that he can control which memory he loses and he can give up an unpleasant memory. He doesn’t realize that she is conning him and has other plans.
This won’t be perfect, but it should be a good start. You can check your own beginning for grammar and consistency if you are sharing it publicly, but remember that you will revise it later. The beginning should be the first quarter or less – just enough to set up the premise and one conflict from your story. When I teach my short fiction class in September, I’ll have students share up to 250 words of a story that will be 1000 words or slightly longer.
Alright then, here’s the start of my own writing example, Memory Exchange: